My Old Dearest Enemy

4 responses to “My Old Dearest Enemy”

  1. What an interesting surreal poem! I enjoyed the constant motion and changing scenes.

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    1. thank you, i am so glad you felt the constant (slightly frantic) motion in this one

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    Ordinary Person

    This poem is weird, darkly funny and bittersweet. I guess our relationships with exes turned frenemies can be sour and sweet at the same time. The whole poem was full of magical images but I thought this was super creative:
    A marriage proposal
    Interrupted by Hitchcock birds
    Morphing into reggae tunes before they hit

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    1. thank you, for your usual insightful take, always enjoy that immensely. I very much think those lines you mention a bit of Lewis Carroll inspiration sneaked in subconsciously 🙂

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