From the Outside, Listening In.

push + pull

It’s simple really

The more you push

 The easier it is

For me

To pull Away

nbtlisteningin

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8 responses to “push + pull”

  1. Bobbo Avatar
    Bobbo

    simple words and things are the hardest to write.

    this is perfectly beautiful in its economy of verse.

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    1. nbtlisteningin Avatar
      nbtlisteningin

      thanks so much, I had to fight my bad habit of saying too much, and just kept repeating, ‘It’s contained and complete, leave it be Martin’

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      1. Bobbo Avatar
        Bobbo

        well done on the restraint.

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  2. Atishay Jain Avatar
    Atishay Jain

    simple words are actually the hardest to write
    well written

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  3. Priti Avatar
    Priti

    Pushing and pulling act equally! Beautifully written

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    1. nbtlisteningin Avatar
      nbtlisteningin

      thank you!

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  4. clcouch123 Avatar
    clcouch123

    This is concise and wise and certainly poetrically crafted. Good work, and thanks.

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  5. Ordinary Person Avatar
    Ordinary Person

    Very very true.

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